My dear Kafaa
your song here is a human meesage to those who use everything wrongly.
Those who blancken the world and disturb the peace on Earth.
It's a call , a quiet scream shooting the face of evil..
It can be recited and sung by children.
It's denoting in spite of its simplicity
Thank you very much indeed
!!!
(However , look up the verb (to shoot
.again; you ued it here to shoot the gun .
It is used like that :
The soldiers shot the target.
Means that they directed and sent fire to strike it
So you shot the guns here!
(You might have used another verb instead of (shoot
Thank you very much.
Sorry for the mistakes in my message
And I appreciate your poem;you're a nice poetess.
07-01-2007, 12:30 AM
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